Yahoo! 知識＋: 改grammar, 關於MTR

我有一份功課係關於MTR, 
請幫我睇下篇文夠唔夠coherent, grammar, 同埋夠唔夠crtitical thinking.

因為我怕比人check到我cheating, 我唔敢係到post
我send左 google link比各位, 希望你地幫一幫我, many thanks!!


答：
1. Economic
 " Five new rail project construction... " to "Five new rail project constructions..."

2. Economic
"MTR able to make ..." to "MTR has the ability to make…"

3. Economic
"trains equipped with LCD… has been introduced." to "… have been introduced."


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